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Here's a little more of my "bits and pieces".


This references a character found in one of my earlier stories "The Life of a Bard". (Thank [livejournal.com profile] marigoldg for *this* particular part of the bunny herd.)
It can be found here at Stories of Arda:
http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2760

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“She hardly believed her fiery eyes
For though it was day to her surprise,
They all went back to bed!”


As the last notes died away the minstrel took a bow to laughter and applause. But he had hardly raised his head when he was propelled backwards by a small body slamming into him and his name called out in joy.

“Menelcar!”

“Pippin?”

The young hobbit suddenly found himself lifted up and whirled around madly. “Pippin!”

The crowd murmured excitedly at this, as Merry, Faramir and Éowyn arrived.

But suddenly the minstrel set him down and knelt before him. “I beg your pardon, Sir Peregrin, for being so familiar.”

Pippin’s face fell, and a look of distress came into his green eyes. “Menelcar, please don’t do that to me. You are supposed to be my friend!”

The minstrel smiled, though he did not rise. “Very well--Pippin.”

Pippin glanced over his friend’s shoulder. “Menelcar, you remember my cousin Merry? And this is--”

Menelcar rose with practiced grace, turned and bowed. “My Lord Steward, My Lady of Rohan, it is an honor. Sir Meriadoc, it is good to see you again.”

Merry grinned. “If he’s Pippin, I’m Merry, and you know it!” He reached over to give the man his own hug.

Faramir smiled. “Master Menelcar, I see we witness the meeting of old friends here. But it seems you have the advantage of us.” He glanced at Éowyn’s amused face.

Pippin said nothing. There was a speculative look in his eyes.

Merry said “This is Menelcar the minstrel. Pippin was once almost his apprentice.” Merry grinned in anticipation of telling the story.

But Pippin was looking at the musician with an expression of betrayal. “Menelcar--” he said quietly, “--you’ve known we were here in the City all along, haven’t you?”

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From here it's trying to go four different ways...

Date: 2005-01-21 05:13 pm (UTC)
shirebound: (Did someone say hobbit?)
From: [personal profile] shirebound
Oh, what a lovely tie-in to your other story!

*slips the bunny some carrots*

Date: 2005-01-21 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elendiari22.livejournal.com
Oh, I like the tie-in! Menelcar is so cool. :)

Date: 2005-01-21 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bodkin-ra.livejournal.com
Write all of them. It can be like one of those choose your way adventure books that my son used to have. Only better written and more interesting.

It's good to see Menelcar again.

Menelcar!

Date: 2005-01-21 06:03 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Oh thank you so much! I saw 'one of my earlier stories "The Life of a Bard"' in the note and a gave (muted, 'cuz I'm at work) shout of joy. I loved Life of a Bard, and have wanted more of Menelcar - that little mention in one of the Eucastrophes just whetted the appetite. Menelcar picking Pip up and swinging him around is perfect. They are so good together.

viresse

Date: 2005-01-21 06:45 pm (UTC)
slightlytookish: John and Gale looking at each other against a blue background (Merry/Pippin by me)
From: [personal profile] slightlytookish
I've just read both parts and I already love this story! Looking forward to more, in whichever direction the bunnies take you :)

Date: 2005-01-21 11:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azur-infinie.livejournal.com
Oooh, this is great! If it wasn't so late I'd dash off to read "The Life of a Bard" now, but that will have to wait till tomorrow. Very intriguing; I can't wait to read more! :)

Date: 2005-01-22 03:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gamgeefest.livejournal.com
Very promising start. Four different ways, what a dilemma. Try outlining them all out and see which one looks most interesting/promising. Can't wait to read more.

Date: 2005-01-22 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-wonderer.livejournal.com
Now this is an interesting little bunny. I find myself wondering what four ways? A meeting of old friends and you have four ways to go? You are so creative. I can't wait to see where the bunny jumps next. Seems Pippin is a bit hurt that his old friend hasn't tried to make contact sooner. I wonder why he didn't? I also wonder if they will perform together.

Date: 2005-01-22 06:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bodkin-ra.livejournal.com
It's true that I've never seen a good one. But you could do the first!

Maybe not. I always thought they were enough to turn anybody off reading for life. A LotR one? It sounds dire. I don't think I'll seek it out!

Date: 2005-01-22 09:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isil-elensar.livejournal.com
I'd actually like to see the LOTR one. *blushes* I actually liked the 'Choose Your Own Adventure' books. My favorite was one with a unicorn, but I lost it between Texas and Tennessee... I think.

Date: 2005-01-22 09:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isil-elensar.livejournal.com
btw: nice little turn in the story... can't wait to see where it goes!

Date: 2005-01-22 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marigoldg.livejournal.com
Menelcar!! Hooray!!

Date: 2005-01-22 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melilot-hill.livejournal.com
I don't think I've read "The Life of a Bard" yet. I will as soon as I have the time :)
I love this new part. I wonder why Pippin looks betrayed.

Date: 2005-01-25 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elenar.livejournal.com
Very nice to see Meneclar again:)

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