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dreamflowerIn 2004, I posted a story at SoA, a Pippin h/c, called "The Dare". It was pretty well recieved, but something about it had bothered me for a long time, and now, thanks to ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
surgicalsteel I've been able to fix it...
surgicalsteel has made most of us aware that the fanon concept of "stroking the throat" of an unconscious person not only would not work, but would actually be dangerous. And that fic had my one and only use of that particular bit of misinformation. Thanks to SS's good advice, I was able to go in and fix it. And best of all, I just had to change one sentence! I was so afraid I'd have to make a bunch of other changes to fix it!
It's really an easy fix, and I am very pleased now to have that off my mind!
surgicalsteel I've been able to fix it...surgicalsteel has made most of us aware that the fanon concept of "stroking the throat" of an unconscious person not only would not work, but would actually be dangerous. And that fic had my one and only use of that particular bit of misinformation. Thanks to SS's good advice, I was able to go in and fix it. And best of all, I just had to change one sentence! I was so afraid I'd have to make a bunch of other changes to fix it!It's really an easy fix, and I am very pleased now to have that off my mind!
