Consequences of a Fall

[dreamflower]

I've updated my fic, "Consequences of a Fall" over at Stories of Arda:

Chapter 12
http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterview.asp?sid=4514&cid=18721

Comments

[gloryunderhill.livejournal.com]

*claps* Very much enjoyed it! I'm loving the Hyacinth bits. Poor Pip! I could almost feel the sunburn. The last bit with Pearl was so sweet!

[dreamflower]

So glad you are liking it. Hyacinth, the hobbit everyone loves to hate, LOL!

I tried to be accurate in the description of the sunburn; I'm glad you thought I succeeded.

And I liked having a chance to show Pippin and his oldest sister together--not something I often get to do.

[oooootricia00.livejournal.com]

I definitely need to peruse that fic once finals are over! I remember liking your work a whole lot when I had time to read loads of LOTR fanfics... I'm Trishette on SoA.

[dreamflower]

Hi, Trishette! I'll be happy to "see" you again! I always look forward to your comments!