B2MEM

Mar. 2nd, 2007 07:26 pm
dreamflower: gandalf at bag end (Boromir)
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Here's a drabble for B2MEM--prompt from [livejournal.com profile] there_n_back
Rating: G

B: LIKE A BATHING BOROMIR

Merry and Pippin dried themselves with towels as large as blankets, and quickly dressed. It had been their first visit to the large bathing house in Rivendell. It had been quite a treat to swim in the huge bathing pool, with its water heated by some mysterious spring.

As they were getting ready to leave, Boromir arrived. He gave them a pleasant nod in greeting, as he disrobed and stepped into the pool.

Pippin stared. “Merry,did you see all those scars?” he hissed.

“He’s a warrior, Pippin. Thank goodness we shall never have a reason to worry about such things.”

Date: 2007-03-03 01:38 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] claudia603.livejournal.com
oooh. What a poignant last line!

Date: 2007-03-03 01:57 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
Very nice.

Date: 2007-03-03 02:36 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
I especially love the towels the size of blankets. *grins*

Date: 2007-03-03 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mumstheword54.livejournal.com
Well done!
The sudden shock of seeing all the scars after they'd had such a nice swim was very effective.

Are you planning to write one entry for each letter of the alphabet?

Date: 2007-03-03 02:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] baranduin.livejournal.com
Oooh, that's good!

And I'd like to pay a visit to that bathing house myself :-)

Date: 2007-03-03 03:28 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] slightlytookish
I always like the poignancy of early-in-the-Quest Merry and Pippin never thinking they'd have to actually fight. This is great.

Date: 2007-03-03 09:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] boz4pm.livejournal.com
Boromir! :( *sobs*

Poor hobbits - they really had no idea what lay ahead of them. *sobs some more*

Date: 2007-03-03 12:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
Poor little hobbits, they were such innocents, even then. It took Moria to really show them what they were facing.

Date: 2007-03-29 02:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] illyria-novia.livejournal.com
Two things that make this fic land on my heart with a resounding THUMP: Boromir's scars, and the hobbits' innoncence.

And like Baranduin I wish I could lurk around that bath-house *wistful sigh "Boromir!"*

Thank you so much, Dreamflower.

Date: 2007-03-29 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] belegcuthalion.livejournal.com
Wonderful, Dreamflower. Those two had no idea of what was lying ahead... They would have their own battles, their own scars in time.

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